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Cops and Robbers Take a Turn

"I've hardly come across stories about cops and robbers, especially in a Horror setting, so the plot was interesting. However, it came across more as an Action-Comedy with a Bad End. Not to say the story was badly written, quite the opposite. I liked reading it and was never bored at any point. I guess when I think of Horror/Humour, or Dark Comedy, I've read them as long jokes about serious themes with a punchline that would give an uncomfortable chuckle (or a maniacal laughter) from the reader. This felt like a reversal, swaying between lighthearted to seriousness, with the last paragraph placing it in the latter. If the ending had a better punchline to it, it could be counted as a Dark Comedy, if that's the route this story wants to take."

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