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What is your opinion?

Great writer

"Great writing "

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Great writer

"Great writing "

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Review

"A very intense book. Enjoying the read but I have to say some of it is rough"

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Kinky

"It’s so perfectly kinky that I can’t describe in words it’s not for underage of soft readers but from my personal opinion I loved it"

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His(18+)

"I would recommend this book to anyone who loves spicy scenes with plenty of BDSM and degration or getting degraded. I gave the story five stars because of how many spicy scenes there are and just how much detail is put into it. Honestly 10 out of 10. Such an amazing story."

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My review

"I loved the storyline and everything about it but I feel as if her husband maybe use a bit too much aggressiveness when pleasuring her .I feel maybe we could soften a lil bit and be more explanatory on his true desires for her but above all else It's an amazing story"

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His

"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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His

"I like the book yes I would tell.my friends to read the rating because I like the book"

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Hey the book is good .

"Hey the book is good but it shows that 17 episodes are updated but there is only 8 please solve this problem"

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review

"There are multiple grammatical errors that are disrupting the flow of the story"

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HIS

"Love it and can't wait to see what happens to their kinky love story! Update soon I hope? Thanks "

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Tooo hot to handle....🥵

"My god..... Too intense pls update...🙏"

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Goood

"Really liked it updates soon please!!!!!!!!! Love your writing style"

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Update

"Good story but wondering why is on the way. It is more from his story when he grew up md how he took care of her?"

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V sexy

"Good one, bdsm on point "

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His

"This is kinda hot. Great writing. Hope more is coming soon."

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His

"When are you uploading next coz i need to know what happens to her"

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I loved it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

"I like the plot it ia a perfect mafia Rance which I have ever come across ...I loved your work man plz update your work and keep it up bro........ "

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Great

"I liked everything"

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His(+18)

"This is a great book please update, it is very interesting and I recommend it to everyone to read"

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