Prosaic

"I love the structure of the story.it has some coming of age vibes on it.a tight knit family and a teenageronits forefront who tells the story from kind of a diary-like thoughts.this is good but I recommend more mysteries or more fleshed out characters,the first chapter tells us a lot about the mc and her family, the second one is more on delving in the world.for stories like these, john green/david levithan are good authors to start with in terms of plotting and the tone of the narrative.their scenes are more exciting and gripping in tone.overall,a good story to start reading on inkitt.👍👍"