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Holding On

"Please finish that other book quickly so you can finish this one. I'm seriously invested in this book and I need to know more. I'm so happy they are together I need to know if they really are endgame. I'm sure that they are however ur the author and I do love a plot twist lol. Anyway thank you for writing stories I can immerse myself in. Keep writing. "

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Amazing book

"🥰🥰🥰🥰Hooked. Love everything about this. Ohh the story line, the way it narrated. I'm in awe"

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Holding on

"My best friend"

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tknodle

"I was so excited to see a sequel to the first book. I love the story of Natalie and Aiden. I cannot seem to stop reading and get completely lost in their journey! I definitely am anxious for more!"

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Holding on

"Love love love. Hope they make it permanent this time around. Even got me going there for a while"

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Omg I'm loving this

"Such a good update "

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Love it

"I loved the first book but so far this is rating better "

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Master piece

"My fave story, excited for the next chapter and the next and the next and the next.."

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Love

"Omg please update, im obsessed with this story and their relationship! Im dying to know what happens next!! ❤❤"

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Holding on

"It's good and I really like it waiting for an update on the book"

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Holding On

"Can't wait to read more of the chapters wish you're well and have time to spare to finish this sequel I was on edge and kinda heartbroken when I finished the 1st one. Your story has the sense of what happens in a real world not the typical fairytale endings or too much exaggerated drama novels that makes my eye roll so many times they might come out. Great work!!"

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Love these two and Ella...classic!

"Thank you, loving this so much 🥰"

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Holding On

"I am one of the fanclub (Natalie & Aiden) from Unfolding. So exciting to know more about their life after highschool and after the broking up. Always admire their caring, feeling of each other. ❤️❤️❤️ Love this story so far. 👍👍👍 Thank you"

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Waiting time gonna be long...

"Ok. Can wait ... but quick few updates would be appreciable 😆"

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Loved it

"I loved that one can relate to the story and how peoples reactions at love, happiness and heart break feels real. "

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