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LOVE IT

"Really liked the story, feels really natural, not just steamy-oriented. The English is good (I'm french tough, but feels ok to me) The dynamic is great, the characters feel real, they are really well built regarding the psychology I think. Totally recommand this story, would love to have it on paper as well ❤️"

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Beautifully written, paints pictures in my mind.

"Really funny, and a page-turner as well. Always have to read on, have to know how/if this will work out in the end. I love it. ❤️ the language, too."

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Yessssss!

"This story is something! Honestly. I really, really liked it. I liked how it was slow in the beginning and you really got to know and love the characters (especially Sky - for me he's the ultimate comfort character!). I liked the hilarious dialogues between Tristan and his Mum. And I liked how -all of a sudden - the slow walk through the story became a rollercoaster ride. And tension! So much tension!!! Would recommend 10/10!"

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