My review

"I've been looking through your profile after Red Cigarettes and this story did not disappoint. The point of view alternation style is very interesting and I love how you made sure that the characters have a different style of their own (which is a really really good thing). I love that in Loui's perspective, everything is soft and calm while Randall's is a bit more mature, more swearing and I felt more anxious reading his. I love how you built the chemistry between the characters and the low-key sexual tension between the two. I kept screaming in Chapter 2 since the sexual tension was killing me! An overall good plot and good storyline. Hope you update this :)<3"