What is your opinion?
Lilac Storm
"Very good writing and plot. I only read books that are completely finished and I hope the second one is too. "
Creative Collaboration: Turning Your Words into Art
"This is a love story that mingles political games, suspense, and romance. Strong and determined, Francesca tackles a complicated case of Peter within the trial. She also gets to experience and fall in love with Cyrus, the king, as the drama unfolds. In the end, it is all about an emotional proposal, action-packed and full of heart. This is a romance drama with action, promising for the future as the couple endures. The characters that make up this story are as follows: Cyrus, Francesca, Peter, and Elder Johnathan. ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! I would to have a detailed chat with you so do lemme know your preferred social media platform where we can chat💓 "
Amazing
"I liked the twist of the sttoryy with Antoinette and how she was brainwashed by the witches to be on their side.i wanted to know more about what happened with all of the side characters but the story ended by then😂😅. But overall, I loved the journey my mind has taken me while reading this story. Thank you, author. "
Lilac storm
"Nice read, would definitely recommend and read more. "
Lilacc story 🥰🥰
"Great story love the characters, the storyline is great, there's a lot that is hanging in air, so would be a great idea have a second book, plenty of story to tell, Adrien story, Naeiva maybe nit death that would be awesome, love love the story ❤️❤️❤️❤️ thank you author for sharing your story with us."
Good
"The story so far has a good plot with strong characters and is easy to follow."
A Great Read
"I thoroughly enjoyed this story and the plots along the way. But m team Adrian. "
Lilac storm
"I like the story, it's very inspiring and beautiful. There are some errors in there but that's okay, as a writer myself mistakes are prone to happen and that's okay☺️❤️"
Title for the nxt
"I was thinking of another title which you could use for the next book. It need not be too cliche but I maybe wrong too. I suggest " The Guardians of The South " ."
Good book
"Great book so far"
Intriguing
"The book kept me on edge. Couldn't stop reading. Hope to see a sequal with Adrien story."
Elemental love
"Very easy to read. Good storyline. Thank you"
Lilac Storm
"It was a good book and the way the plot move was great.❤"
Lilac Storm
"I LOVE this book, everytime I would think I am done reading for the night I find myself going into it again!! I NEED MOOORRE"
Cool book
"Like your writing style"
Thanks
"Thanks you for the support"
Have tons of potential
" I love the plot, but I like more side stories, building up the characters, unexpected turn of events. We have a few characters in the novel that you could have branched out and try to tie them all back together. Surviving the fall, a redemption for a misguided, back story for the traitor, more description on the war. I think the first portion was a nice pace. But once she was captured it felt like the story ran too fast and then slowed down again when the King reached the witches. Your talent and art is there, but I think it can have more so that readers can be hooked up with the characters. It has a lot of potential to be more. Grammatical and spelling errors can be done with a little bit of proofreading, but your story stelling is on its way. Thank you for this book. I'm hoping for revision/s and/or more stories from the author."
Kay
"It's a nice book, I think just a bit more details "
Very nice
"I like it very much "
Lilac Storm
"There were a few errors(grammatical and spelling). Otherwise it was great!🤗"
