What is your opinion?
My review
"Perfect! :)"
Still great
"Alright, It's still great. but I'll be honest you lost me in a few places. It's not as good as your other stuff. Still way really good though. Though you could use it to polish the wording and grammar a bit more."
Girls will love it
"The story is more for girls. As I guy all I can say, I wish I was the guy. Detailed and wild. Let's see what comes next."