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My review

"Perfect! :)"

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Still great

"Alright, It's still great. but I'll be honest you lost me in a few places. It's not as good as your other stuff. Still way really good though. Though you could use it to polish the wording and grammar a bit more."

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Girls will love it

"The story is more for girls. As I guy all I can say, I wish I was the guy. Detailed and wild. Let's see what comes next."

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