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What is your opinion?
Nice
"I liked this one more than the grand slam. You might want to put a line in there that specifies he's over 18. You should keep going on this one. Though one thing going to say it. Quotation marks. You need to use Quotation marks. lol"
Lecherous
"A bit too detailed for me, but good use of words. Lets see this story build."
