The Girl in the Chutes

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

lunaartsoul___: I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.

Wendy Salvo: I really liked this story but now that I’ve read all three I wanted to come back with a thought, the forward on this story talks about a reverse harem and not having to choose, but there isn’t any choice, or thought of a harem until the moment she connects with them, there is only foreshadowing of o...

starlit_soul: The story was beautifull. I hope that every paris find her julien who heals her.

Katja: Good writing, excellent story.

mmurphy1008: This book had my attention from the very first chapter! It has romance and humor and just enough tension to keep it moving along. Can’t wait to read more from this author.

Read4Free16: Fantastic development of characters and story line

mcmint831: Characters have depth. The pace of the story is good. Would like a bit more detail of their personal lives and not just their relationship.

Shriya: Such a lovely read. I appreciate the author's writing style. The focus is on the plot and characters and not so much on the details of physical intimacy. It made the story an absolute delight and deeply engaging. Can't wait for more from the author.