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No good choice

"Loved the story. Great story line"

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No good choice

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No Good Choice

"I like the book so far. It’s very much a slow paced book, but it sets up the lead character well. I wish we could get the brothers’ pov sometimes and know more about the world around her but other than that I enjoy it. "

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Great read so far can't wait to read more.

"Nothing wrong with the book so far, hope it doesn't leave me high and dry as I want to read more."

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Intriguing

"I couldn't put it down read the first 12 chapters in one go "

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Good

"Enjoyable"

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Like this book

"I would recommend It is well written and keeps you interested Can't wat to see what happens next"

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No good choice

"Love the book and can't wait to see what happens next "

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No Good Choice

"No good choice has been a good read so far. I really like the plot and I often find my self so immersed in the story that I feel like I am silver. The writer has done a wonderful job with the characters and I look forward to reading the completed copy. This book is definately for mature audiences only."

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Pheonixrizin

"I'm looking forward to reading more. The father was an absolute pig of a man and hope the sons will be better men "

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Silver

"Good job silver"

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No good choice

"This is a change in the usual story not sci-fi but definitely future. Well maybe not. It not like there are not sex slaves but they are not as well compensated."

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Chapter 7

"Just waiting for some action"

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No good choice

"I disliked it from the very beginning I cannot even give it a star ... I recommend this to no one"

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