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Fey

"So sad her life will be"

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Need morre

"Does this really have to be a short story??? 🥺🥺🥺"

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Wow!

"Where is the rest of the story please? You are masterful with fantasy.♥️"

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Second Read Through

"The author has one of the most incredible imagination I have ever had the pleasure of reading. However this story is so hard to review. I don't want to give anything away. Let me just say this...this is the my second read through and I still got choked up at the end. I fell in love with how he talked to and treated his "Sweet Thing". The writer presented us with a “gel” and a chance meeting with A hard man to resist. My only question throughout the entire story was Leave, why the hello would I ever leave anyone who made me feel like that? So that’s the question, isn’t it? Did his Sweet Thing leave? Or was he just too hard to resist? If you read this and love it, like I did. You must read “His By Law”, this is it’s prequel"

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