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What is your opinion?

Model forced into slavery

"Loved it. Amazing book but the grammatical mistakes annoy me "

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Model Forced Into Slavery

"I like the story. 👍🔥"

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A opinion and suggestion

"I loved the story it was amazing. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. I loved the plot it all just flowed together and it wasn't choppy at all it was super easy to understand what was going on. I did notice that this is only part one and that there is more to come but to me it would make more sense to make it all just one book . Especially sense part one was so short it just doesn't make sense to me why you split up the book into parts. This is just an opinion. I just have to say it one more time this is an amazing story and I can't wait to read the next part."

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