What is your opinion?
primal fears
"while there were some grammatical errors, (context) and spelling, this story surprisingly was quite the read. it sucks you in, after a rather dragging statt, and was intensly on the edge of your seat frightening. i thooroughly enjoyed this, and look forward to seeing more from you in the future. many thanks for sharing this with us!"
Primal fears
"I like the story it was very exciting and scary can't wait to get to the end"
Excellent story crafting
"A first rate story and well crafted, the blend of horror and action worked very well indeed and had me turning page after page. When not actually reading it, I found myself thinking about it which is always a good sign. There are quite a few grammatical and spell-checker errors but nothing another proof reading cant fix, don't let it out you off because the story is worth it and the ending is interesting. The phrase 'The Brunette' is greatly overused as well but those are the only two quibbles I have in an otherwise very good read. Do yourself a favour and read this story at your earliest convenience, it is worth it."
wow
"D'graive is the conduit the whoooole time. Can you believe that? DAMN NATURE YOU SCARY! WHAT IN TARNATION"
OMG!!!
"OMG!! I bloody loved this story and to be honest I want more like maybe a part II... It was so scary that I will be sleeping with a night light because I was so scared. I literally am holding my teddy bear. That is how good this story is. It started out mellow like any normal story would; but in most horrors the story ends up being predictable... As for Primal Fears, you would not expect it to be what it is. I honestly did not picture that happening but I need more. This deserves a sequel. Amazing!!"
Yep
"Pretty goood"
Primal Fears
"I really didn’t like the naming the people by hair colour but other then that I enjoyed the read. The story had me interested and guessing what comes next. "
Horror(40%)+action (60%)= primal fear
"I felt as if i am watching a movie,not reading a book. The story was definitely interesting. It was more of action than horror for me. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors I came across and at times I found it difficult to imagine some things which the author is trying to convey, but overall it is a well crafted story."
More action than horror
"Yes it was an interesting story for sure! Although the horror didn't appeal to me, not my type of horror though and as it proggressed it seemed to be more of a survival filled with action rather than a horror novel, I missed some more mystery as well. And I can't say much about the characters because they weren't that well explored. Otherwise it was really an entartaining book, for action, suspense lovers worth read and besides the creepy atmosphere at the start was amazing."
