"Finding Home"

"MK, great start with your story, Time to continue and finish your work...........really good.......just a short comment,,,,,you might want to proof or edit a bit more, and some sentence structure.........over all MK, the Story is cool, moves really fast and I hope to read the rest when you submit.........please; william elliott kern Dead or Alive https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550"