What is your opinion?
Justchillin2
"Well done. I enjoyed the story line. A bit confused about why she was eligible to marry a prince in the first place. No one (characters) asked or said. Also, Edward asked if she read his letter. Why didn’t she ever read it? Why wouldn’t the author let us know what it said. Supposedly it explained everything. Edward was agreeable to her taking her time so why write him out? The end seemed rather abrupt. Is the reader to assume she’s with Ezrah? The title doesn’t seem to fit. Found only a couple spelling errors. Very pleasant to read a readable manuscript. "
Very good storyline
"I like this book alot. I am however left with several questions.... What happened when she was 11? Why did her parents promised her to Edward? Did she eventually fall in love with Edward? Why does Edward want to marry her? "
