What is your opinion?
A princess home guide
"This was a pretty interesting story. There were quite a few grammatical errors though."
Needs Editimg
"First, let's start with your strengths. I like your creativity and use of magical creatures. You also give the personality of the characters. The world is not clear, although, I would suggest adding more world building, and more explanations, The idea was intriguing, but it was unbelievable that the main character immediately found the key to the book. I also didn't get the point of the champagne or what was going on in the beginning. It’s a good start, but it needs more editing."
Good Start!
"I like your style, especially liked the description of her fiddling with the necklace while she was in the library, I thought that was a super cool way of showing that. I enjoy the plot, although it does mirror that of many I've read before, so I'm hoping something else comes in to sort of set it apart. You do have really cool fantasy characters, although they're all introduced very quickly because the plot moves very quick (which isn't necessarily bad since I get that you want this to feel overwhelming for her, but it would be nice to maybe have it be a little slower) There were a lot of grammar mistakes that took away from the story, so I think a round of editing is necessary. Your actual technical style is great, but it's hard to enjoy it when some of the verbs are in the wrong tenses and such. So I'd use Grammarly or maybe have a friend read through it to help fix some of that. Overall, I think it's a good start! I hope there's something that will be revealed in the plot later on (since this review is only at chapter 6) that will set it apart from other stories with a similar plot, but we shall see! Good luck!"
