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What is your opinion?

Shutt

"It's a story about hope when everything in life is at its lowest. Written in such a way that human nature is exposed with simplicity and depth. This story is definitely created with "outside of the box" thinking. It is always a treasure to read a unique story. I will never enter the halls of the literary genius myself, but this author has potential for that honor. Thank you for the read. "

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Shutt

"Lovely story. Not what i was expecting at all. Loved the happy but somewhat sad ending. Well done. "

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I enjoy it

"I really like this novel, I simply like it It's a folk story but with a little bit of twist. I love how the story goes. At the end theres always hope for everything. "

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Entertaining but the ending was somewhat disappointing

"The ending appears to contradict the moral of the story, with King Eli defeated by King Greedy despite his perseverance alongside his army of hope, only to be rescued by the witch at the last minute. In addition, Princess Elise seems to be nothing more than a helpless damsel, when she was allegedly the beacon of hope. Ironically, she was the very reason King Eli surrendered to King Greedy, thereby giving up on hope."

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