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What is your opinion?

Falling for the mafia leader

"Wow!! Powerful !! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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So good

"So good I can’t wait til the next update hopefully soon. "

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Falling for the Mafia Leader

"I really enjoyed the way the plot is panning out. I think that it needs to be edited a bit more but over all a great book. "

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reader

"It a great book but they been to stop leaving it on cliff "

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Anthonio

"I love the story cos no beating around the bush"

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Falling for the mafia leader

"We need more"

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None

"So far it’s good"

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Boring

"Every was just everywhere"

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Meh

"I like the plot but I hate how fast it is and how it has bad spelling and grammar as well"

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I wouldn't recommend reading this.

"There were a lot of problems like the spelling was very off, the story kept changing, and it wasn't very realistic. The principal probably wouldn't have done that in reality."

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