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Loveeeee

"I’m in love!! You’re writing style is amazing, can’t wait for the next upload."

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Weathered

"It’s rare to see stories about black women in fantasy so I truly enjoyed this. I hope she gets out of this dilemma"

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My dirty past

"Nice storyline "

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Great Story

"The book was well written and had me on the edge of my seat most times. However, I do believe some of the characters could have been developed a little more. Overall amazing book and I can't wait for part 2!"

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WEATHERED

"This book was so intriguing and passion filled!The author has wonderful writing skills that draws you in (and leaves you wanting more) to all the emotions of the characters depicted in the story!Great read!!!!"

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Weathered

"Excellent and exciting"

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Ver refreshing

" So new in this genre"

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Weathered

"I like the story fine. What I don't like is being hijacked to do a review and stopping my reading"

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Weathered

"This story has unexpected plots and twists. I like that there are two sexy men after her attention."

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One of the best stories I've read

"I absolutely love the story so far but the chapters could use some organizing "

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Weathered

"This was a very good story and I hope there will be a sequel "

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It's nothing but amazing

"It is very well-written and I love the character in it, and the words how it used is also very creative, I would recommend it to my friends if they had Inkitt, as stories like these are hard to find, a poc female character is hard to come by in actual books, and seeing this I hoped I could share to those friends who wanted to be seen by books and movies, I give this a book a 10/10"

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Interesting

"A lot of plot twist ..I can't wait to see how you tie everything together "

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Weathered

"Is there a book 2 because you left me hanging and I was starting to enjoy this book."

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Weathered

"Overall the plot of this book was okay. However, it was a bit confusing as the chapters were repeated or uploaded incorrectly. Also, the book stopped suddenly. I wish the author would complete the story or upload a part II."

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Weathered

"Ending was left open. Possible sequel, I guess. I feel as though I wasted my time reading this. Too many plots open, repeat of chapters, chapters out of order. Could still be a good book. Re-write and upload new. "

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