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A gripping opening
"Amy's recurring dream of the woman wreathed in flames is such a strong hook, and it landed right before the ambush in the alley. The worldbuilding details, like the Boala War lingering in everyone's memory, made the fear feel earned rather than generic. Hooked already and curious how her fate ties back to Nix and Lilith."
Enjoyable and satisfying fantasy.
"It is a joy reading this (and the other stories) story of this writer. Writingstyle is fluent and no ( oke, I found one in this story) typo's. The writing is positive/endearing and gives you a good feeling after reading (English is not my spoken language so my art of writing may be strange...). I like the mind/fantasy of the writer. "
