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Run

"Well thought out good plot points and very captivating. All in all I like it so far. Ya ya ya ya ya ya ya ya ya "

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Run

"This story made me cry but it was worth it... Ariana-Rose got to be free have a family and a happy life!!! This story jas a great plot. But the athour should have done James's povo more.... Over all a great story!👏😁 Great job!😁👏"

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literally no tears left to cry

"This book is AMAZING. The characters are well-written. I love the plot is very dark but I love it. And I love how the author able to show the personality of the main character through the writing. I haven't cried this much while reading a story. So, I really love this book and might read this again if I want to emotionally torture myself lol. I can't wait to read other works by the author. "

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Amazing

"This book made me cry for it's entirety. It was amazing, the plot was strong and you really become invest in the main character's growth."

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Recommended

"It's such a great read, and you can feel the emotion. "

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Run

"Wow so wonderfully impressed, this book definitely holds your attention. I kept waiting for Aria to stand up to her father I quess better late than never. Great book really enjoyed it."

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Connie

"This book was so good. Charlie's deserve to die."

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Run

"Very dark, but I kept reading! Needs a proofreader, but I enjoyed the tempo. Good ending."

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Good

"Its good very well detailed "

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I feel horrible for the way that Ari is being treated.

"I'm actually crying right now, because she doesn't deserve this life, no one does. 😐😢😭 I really was hoping that she would be able to go away with Max and be happy, or go with James. I haven't finished this yet, bit I'm hoping the end of this, is a happy one. She doesn't deserve to get abused, in fact, no one deserves being abused in any which way or form, it literally makes me so sad, that this is happening to her, it isn't right. Also all I can say is that a have a few choice words I could describe her father with, and non of them are nice, happy, or able to be said out loud right now 😤😠🤬🤬🤬 I'm really hoping that something extremely bad happens to that dad, like really bad. That's probably not something you should hope for, but he deserves so much worse than just dying. He has put Ari through so much 🤬...*clears throat* Too much stuff, for way to long without any consequences, and it isn't okay, and he needs to pay for what he has done to not only her but the multiple deaths on his hands, of not only friends and neighbors, but also family (countless almost killings with Ari). He seriously needs to be locked up,.and go through 10 times worse, what he put Ari through, he deserves worse than that. That piece of absolute 🤬🤬🤬. *Huff's* ok, rant over, you get my point, karma needs to to B**** slap him, and extremely, and I mean extremely, hard. But I mainly feel really sad for Ari,.she doesn't deserve this life, at all. 😢"

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Run

"I really enjoyed this story right at the beginning, I just couldn't put it down.. I liked that you had a female character as the lead. It was a different ending and what took her so long."

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Run

"It was intense, but kept my attention. I love the "happy" ending. "

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Run

"I really like the stoy but i just hate that there isn't more. Than just him beating her up al the time. There should be more of a story line"

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Jjjuu

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Awr

"Ari has to go thru a lot a such a young age... "

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* Woods

"Story is disjointed, hard to read with no punctuation. Still do not understand what the story is about others than abuse and violence. Devil's and demons seen too play a part, I'm not sure. Wish I had stopped reading after first chapter."

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