A Boy and his Tiger

"I really enjoyed this story and - especially - the warm feeling the end gave me. It was one of those stories I really enjoyed, and reminded me of a supreme book I'd read once about bears, which had a similar, beautiful ending. I like your writing style, too, although I'd like to offer a little critique. I hope you don't mind! The things I thought you should improve were showing instead of telling. For most of the story, you were telling us what Aleksei was doing. Instead, perhaps you could show us one of Aleksei's memories: like the one of his parents' death etc. Also, if he's afraid, show it. Instead of saying "he was afraid," try something like "Aleksei's skin blanched. He wanted to curse himself beneath his breath, but the giant cat was in front of him. He couldn't move. He couldn't make a sound. His eyes darted to either side, searching for the right weapon. Perhaps the (enter weapon here)? However, it was futile." Of course, don't use this text necessarily: it's just an example of showing fear an anger. Once, you did say "Aleksei froze" and that was brilliant. It gave me a true image of his reaction. Other than that, a very warm kind of story. I hope the advice helps! I really enjoyed reading this, so well done! Nicely written! Lastly, if you do edit this story, feel free to ask me to have a look! I would also then edit this review accordingly. :)"