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Achatalo

"Interesting premise! I really like the idea and plotline of the story. The image is clear in my mind, and my personal favorite character is Silviu. He has a likable charm to him. I really think you should continue on with this story as it is an inspiring writing piece. Are you thinking about writing a sequel one it is finished?"

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YAH WELL!

"HERE U GO!! U SAID U WRITE GOOD BOOK. SO WHATEVER> GRT PLOT LINE AND CHARACETRS. I RLLY LIKE IT> PLS ADD MORE SOON. MAD>HATTER ><"

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My eyes are GLUED to the screen

"This is such a great book! I've been binge reading this a lot, and I also love your other stories so much! I will stay alert for all posts! It's quite sad you took down 'The Tail of A Mermaid' because I really did love that book! Please re-upload it soon..."

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Inspiring

"OMG!!! I love this book. The plot and characters are amazing. I soooo sad you left the chapter, Inner Fire on a cliffhanger I really wanted to know more about the illusion. The book becomes more intriguing every time you add a new chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Your faithful friend, Caitlin F"

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LOOKING FORWARD TO ANOTHER CHAPTER

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Amazing

"Omg I love the plot!"

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Amazing

"Interesting!"

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Achatalo

"I can't believe you are such a good writer! I think within the next few chapters the story will get very interesting as the plot unfolds. Great job!"

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Achatalo

"Amazing read, I personally am not too keen on books of this topic but that's just me not the actual book. To anyone who does like this particular topic, I highly recommend it. This is 100% not a complaint though, I like this story a lot!😃"

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Intriguing Premise

"This is a short summary of the actual story. I will be looking forward to the actual novel. The plot contains mystery, violence, rebellion and a hidden heroine. Achatalo should be worth the wait! "

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