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Black Hole

"The Author did a good job with book 1 to whet my appetite for more. Book 2 didn't disappoint in holding my interest. I was ecstatic to learn about Book 3. Ugh!!! The fight scenes, Raven's spunk and bravery...what's not to love? Bring it on!!👏👏👏"

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Book 3

"I can’t wait for book 3 !!!!!! "

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Black Hole

"I loved the first book and was ecstatic to find the sequel. The 2nd book is just as good as the first. I have not been able to put it down! I LOVE Dhol and King Soji!"

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Enjoying this story

"I was so happy to find out there was a sequel to the first book. It is fantastic and full of interesting ideas. I can not wait to read more. It’s been a long time since a story has intrigued me like this series has. Thank you for everything!"

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Awesome

"I have been glued to my phone, devoured each and every chapter. I am in love with King Soi Ji and hope for them to be reunited. "

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loving this story

"I love this story, the first book I read so fast that even I was surprised. I was desperate when I found out that there would be a sequel and the second book was not in the app I subscribed to. I searched on the internet and founded the second book 🙏. I follow each chapter as soon as it comes out. I just don't subscribe to Patreon because I'm from Brazil and the currency conversion is expensive at the moment, and as I've already subscribed to another app, it doesn't pay for me, but I keep following it here."

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Black Hole

"Defiently keeps you wanting to keep reading page after page"

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Black hole

"This author is the reason I even know about inkitt. Her writing style is impressive, and it continues to improve the more she writes. This book has a good storyline with the action, twists, and all plus the kink. I wish more kink books would learn something from her. If you haven’t already, I highly recommend reading the first book, but book two definitely does not disappoint. "

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Good book

"I like the plot if this book. It is in line with the first book and tells of Ravems background. This app is easy to use and I may keep it to read other books if I find something interesting. "

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Good story!!!

"I really wish I knew what was wrong with Raven and she’s just psycho"

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Liking it so far

"So far so good. Disappointed it ever where it did. Looking forward to hear the rest of Ravens story. This is a good fiction story set in the future. "

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