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It keeps you wondering what will happen next and what happened to Mark in the first placr

"Liked the story right from the start Would recommend to my friends and I give it an excellent review. "

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Amazing story

"It is and amazing story I can’t stop reading it!"

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new chapter?

"the book was amazing but it need other chapter cant end like this!!! i want to know what happens next but over all it good!"

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"Cool story. You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App."

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Awesome

"Your story deserves a lot of audience, you can publish it on NovelStar Mobile App."

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In Damien’s Keeping

"Enjoying your story. Looking forward for an update."

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Amazing

"Please keep writing! Can't wait to read more."

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Damien

"I love this so far!!! There is a great plot and setting. I would recommend this to my mother. I love the plot twist!!!"

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Author presents quite different story and plots and i surely liked it very much this novel is definitely amazing piece for entertainment. I would recommend this book to my one of friend who likes to read mystery stories whereas i gave this story five stars rating because the main female role personality is pretty different from typical type of girls personality like they are utterly horny. I don't dislike anything so far.

"Author presents quite different story and plots and i surely liked it very much this novel is definitely amazing piece for entertainment. I would recommend this book to my one of friend who likes to read mystery stories whereas i gave this story five stars rating because the main female role personality is pretty different from typical type of girls personality like they are utterly horny. I don't dislike anything so far."

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Awesome the writing makes u feel like it is going on with u

"The novel is having a good plot line but nothing out of the ordinary..u can actually assume the next "

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Very nice novel written

"Very nice written vovel"

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Love

"Very nice book and intresting.loved it"

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In Damien's keeping

"I like everything ❤️"

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in damiens keeping

"i enjoyed reading this story, i love the author and hope u could write another story..thank u author!"

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This is kinda nice story line and yeah! I enjoined it alot. I would like to read your work more. It's interesting.

"The storyline is very simple and nice. I would recommend my friends to read this. I think you should write little lengthy chapters. "

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In Damian's keeping

"Very interesting novel he's not out to hurt her after all he's trying to protect her I really like that but he goes about it really in a weird way I like to snuggle I will hopefully find more of it and I will continue reading your novels you did great Arthur thank you"

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In damien's keeping

"I love thisss bookk"

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Young

"It was really good I really loved it the grammar is not the greatest but it's readable good plot and moral"

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Young master Damien

"I like the plot and the way the writer builds the characters in the chapters, a few grammatical mistakes found but didn't ruin the story. Good story so far.."

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Stars

"I am enjoying what is to come with Damien and Lia. I want to see who the woman Damien faced with. I enjoy these types of books "

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