What is your opinion?
Kenya
"The book is super duper great and keeps on capturing my mind as I keep drowning in it's pages"
Kenya
"Interesting "
KENYA MCCLAIN IS SO GAY
"OMGGGG😩 first of all, I want to appreciate the writers writing technique, the metaphorical use of words, grammar that challenges my brain🫶🏾 I also want to appreciate these amazing characters you created😮💨 Kenya’s fine ash. Sade and Nate and Dylan are sooo funny lmao. I need friends like those but Sade takes the trophy😂😂😂😂her sense of humour is funny and I’m sure for someone who doesn’t know her would take her as a rude person but she’s just funny. And as for Kenya, she deserves someone who isn’t Sade because my baby has a golden heart and doesn’t deserve to be played because you’re bored. I WANT MORE CHAPTERS. This was so fun to read 😩🫶🏾"
Love is beautiful beautiful
"I loved everything about this beautiful beautiful book I’m an open gay man and I’m in love with 2 beautiful young Indian men "
Kenya McClain
"The story is very interesting. I love how the author wrote the story in the “tone” of how you would expect the speakers to sound in real life, it gives room for your imagination. It’s very nice, I like it."
Kenya McClain is so straight
"Brooo... I loved reading this story. It gat a great story line. You definitely know where ya going with the story the more I keep the chapters. You do know how to describe and narrate. Judging from what I’ve read, there’s good use of hyperbole in every chapter, similes, imagery... I perfectly visualized everything you described, heard the loud noises Sade and Nate were making when the got into an argument, smelled the autumn air that was passing by at Dylan’s apartment balcony etc. The use of irony was a success too. The title itself is ironic. Kenya McClain is not straight but she claims she is. Overall, this is a great lesbian book🏳️🌈💕. Definitely recommend to my friends in search of a good humor book. Can’t wait for the next chapters "
Gasp!
"I really like that fact that while I am reading this is honestly plays out like a lgbtqia+ tv show. Chapter 5 had me worried for her and it's a great accomplishment to have the reader feel emotion while reading. Great job. I noticed a few spell errors and that's my only criticism! :) I forgot to add that I love how you structured the text messages! A+"
Kenya’s McClain is so straight
"This is definitely a good humor read. Def recommend it, although I’m still trying to grasp the reason for the title given. I don’t see how relevant it is to what your writing, but hey... it’s still ongoing so I’m waiting for the next updates 💕 plus, my fav characters are Nate and Sade. They really are a vibe. Makes me crave to have such frens🤗"
Kenya
"So far, so good. Let's see what else the author has in store ."
Kenya McClain is so straight
"It has a nice story line, it's very entertaining. The character's descriptions could be better to get some kind idea of what they look like, but what's mentioned so far is pretty good. The plot direction as of right now has a clear point and you can tell what's going on so that's also good, great job on that as many plot directions go astray. As for technical difficulties, if you are going to be using abbreviations, use apostrophes to symbolize those. Using words such as "Yea" should still be spelt out because it's not that long of a word. Paragraph separation is really good though, I love your spacing, good use of it! Grammar is also pretty good, but just those abbreviations and shortened words need to be fixed. Overall great work and I'd definitely recommend this book to anyone in for a good humor book. "
