What is your opinion?
By Amaya
"I love this novel, this is now in mine best novels collection and I hope they get married💍💍"
Binge-worthy
"I really loved the firm grasp the author had on their MCs. Each were uniquely different regardless of genders yet the author was able to make them on the same level of dynamics. This is an great coming-of-age story for those who like arc of teenage drama and confusion. "
Awesome
"Loving it so far"
In his heart
"I absolutely love this novel, your structure and form of writing is perfect and makes it easy to get interested in the story. I cannot wait for more chapters!"
In his heart
"Totally amazing story. I hope Lexi and Mason get married."
Exciting
"I love reading this book so well written interesting exciting and lovable ❤I would recommend this book to anyone who loves reading romance novels I would give it a 10 out of 10 too good 👍😊"
Amazing
"It's amazing. I was looking for some high school sweethearts stories. And see, I got the one.🤗 Looking for more updates. And wish you best of luck for your book.❤️"
Anita
"This is quite a unique book. The synopsis was really catchy, it felt like I was about to watch a movie. Keep it up."
In his heart
"Beautiful story"
In his heart
"I liked the story. I hope there's a second book. Very sensual"
Really Sweet!
"I really enjoyed this story. It does follow a lot of overused/popular tropes in romance books, but y'know what they say: If it ain't broke, don't fix it. I do like that it's not overly sappy like a lot of romance books are, the only thing I might say is the dialogue could be slightly more realistic. These are teenagers after all, so I'd expect there to be a little more slang/less formal or grammatical speaking. I think as writers there's a lot of pressure to make everything grammatically perfect, but people don't talk that way - so in dialogue, I think it can be useful to have sentence fragments, run ons, incorrect verbs etc. But that's just be nitpicking. Since it's only the start of the story, I'm expecting that some more juicy drama will come later, so for rising action this is a really great plot so far! Overall, really good story!"
Slow, immature and waste of time...
"definitely not a fan. A lot of spelling grammar mistakes, missing words, or the wrong word added accidentally. I kept reading hoping for some reveals of their pasts. too much detailed sex. way way to much detail. little to no character development. jumping all around without finishing, examples Chris being Lexis friend and bow Masons brother. where is the rest of that side story? there isnt any. but there are so many side stories that start but nothing comes of them. it feels like wasted reading when it doesnt actually add anything to the story. and Marcus is just gone? and the twin sister? secret of masons parents and her scar/mom should I been more revealed by now. and very repetitive wording and phrases. deadpan, long strides, her hitting everyone! everyone constantly hitting each other is so ridiculous, you said they were seniors right? no preschoolers? they, Lexi the most, talk to each other like children "you silly " as again she hit someone. And again, just too many side stories that were unneeded, the constant mention of him suddenly smoking and bed hating it feels so much like it should have been left out, I think its another side part of the story that's just not needed. and omg the scene with the dad literally ready to kill Mason?? that was way way way too far and so bizarre and ridiculous. pointing a shot gun at his daughter with no thought of her wellbeing it seemed. just weird. if there could have been more to their relationship aside from sex, even though she says there is, it's not shown. he even says "you know what I came over her for?" regarding getting laid the same day he asked her to be his girlfriend? there is so much more to a love story, getting into someone's heart than just non stop sex everytime the look at each other. it shows hormones, not feelings. I just wasted way too much time hoping for story and character development, or something's to finally make sense. but it just goes on and on about the sex instead. this is my honest from the heart opinion, so no anger is needed. author asked for real feedback and that is how I feel after reading all that. "
