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oi, cadet (Levi x y/n

"This is good! i would like it if you tried writting longer chapters but if not then that is okay mybe try and break up speach aswell i couldnt tell who was talking in that one scene where y/n is cleaning and levi starts complaining. so if you let me know who is talking rather that bunching it up id appretiate it (srry bad gramar)"

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