Better than original
"It’s a great story the author has improved so much in writing style and character development . Overall a great read ."
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"It’s a great story the author has improved so much in writing style and character development . Overall a great read ."
"This is a great story. Arlo really gives the reader a glimpse into Itsuki's life and motivations. Often with this type of story, things feel stale. That is not the case here. There are a few typos here and there, but they certainly do not detract from an awesome read. "
"There are not many authors that I can read from that have a good plot AND good writing. This rating is well deserved, in fact this book is the only reason I still have this app"