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Great Diversion

"I found the story and plot compelling. The witty dialogue is good, as well as the human drama. The romance scenes aren't over done, keeping it PG and safe for work. I especially enjoyed the short chapters: I am reading this as a diversion where I may be called away for hours, this story provided just that! I do want to see a squeal. Well done and thank you for several hours of entertainment."

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Sad I reached the end

"Yayyy I finished it!! I’m kinda sad I reached the final chapter because I got so attached to all the characters … The final scene was so wholesome. If you ask me, it’s quiet rare to find a work that balances humor, action and soft sentimental scenes perfectly. I need you to write the sequel some day *points gun at you*. Thanks for writing this story 🙏 "

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At the other side of oblivion

"Very good a well written and enjoyable read. A mix of great adventure, humor, a tad of romance and a large slice of grubiness. Excellent. "

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There’s still good people left in oblivion

"This story is well written with great developed characters! "

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