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Amazing!

"I was afraid Vanity would return the man who has cheated. I am glad it ended greatly"

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Voljela bih da ima više drame .Sviđa mi se sve ostalo

"Lepo je napisano ."

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👍🏻

"I like your twisted plots and ending like this. I like kinda this writing style. Thank you for your story."

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What an interesting story

"I didn’t know what to think at first. Then I was engrossed in the plot. Vanity is great female character and I hope she’ll find happiness. There’s always more to the story, it was. Nice work. "

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Surviving Konstantin

"Loving this story"

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Good read

"I love this book can’t seem to put it down. But there are a ton of word errors or typos."

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Fire book

"This author's writing skills is fire "

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Same

"Lagging...."

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Surviving kontantine

"I liked this story very much. If you want to know what it is about so do one thing read it. Shows the fact that true love is love yourself. 🥰🥰"

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Best story ever

"This story needs a class for itself, I don't think anything can compare to this masterpiece. I am sure you have heard this already but your story is number 1. I don't have words to describe how much I love your story and really wish you had a part 2. It has me thinking about love in a different point of view. The characters were exquisite and very well played. Thanks for this amazing story "

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Surviving kontatine

"Love the plot and the characters"

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Surviving kontantine

"Wow !! What a roller coaster ride. I loved it thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Interesting turn of events

"Quite an enjoyable read except for the errors. Definitely needs some editing. I liked how the story twisted and turned but found Vanity to be a frustrating character and her indecisiveness dragged on for far too long but nice read nonetheless 😊 "

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Oh my.

"Gosh I love love this book. I was hoping she didn’t allow herself fall into this stereotypical idea of girls always forgiving infidelity. Love love your writing skill. Well done "

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Omg Wow

"I loved this story it had me right from the beginning. A total roller coaster of emotions had me in tears towards the end and I’m still unsure about their circumstance do I need more absolutely. Please say there’s more. Thank you for sharing with us and now I’m going to look to see what else you’ve got. You are awesome ❤️"

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Good

"Is good to forgive sometimes "

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Amazing

"Initially I thought the betrayal was all a big misunderstanding like many similar stories, however the fact that it wasn’t was heartbreaking and I could feel vanity’s pain. I really thought that they would end up together but like max said too many red flags. Also kon is horrible and selfish and doesn’t deserve her. I can’t wait to read the sequel and hopefully vanity will find not only someone who she truly loves but her person. I hope Kon lives a life of regret for the pain he caused and his audacity of trying to get her back after everything andrende lives terribly. I hate her character. Very emotional, well written story. I loved it 💔"

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Surviving Kontantine

"I love the plot,it's intriguing"

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Surviving kontantine

"Dear author, u have been reading inkitt stories for over a year now and this is the first time I'm ever writing a review ..I know what betrayal feels like people around will hype for the couple they know and not the story...this story of yours captured it so beautifully that I'm actually crying while writing this such a great Book with all of my heart I wish you all the best ❤️"

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"Definitely need a sequel where they end up together and that daughter isn't Kon's"

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