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Smoke and mirrors

"Great story. It's a shame it waffles on at times when Ember remembered things said or what had been said to her in the past. If some of that was taken out it would be fantastic. "

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Loved it

" I loved it. A couple times "she" was wrote as "he" and vice versa, but it was a great book."

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I loved it but the end...

"I truly loved this story but the end came kind of left me disappointed, it felt so unfinished. I hope there will be a sequel! Truly fascinating characters! "

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Smoke and mirrors

"Wonderful story! I love the way descriptions are made, and characters are built. Keep going the good work! I’ll love to read the sequence "

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