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A Game of Destiny
"I didn't think I'd like it w the plot being of magical creatures. I got sucked in. I really enjoy your writing style and the depth you write from. Please continue, I look forward to reading anything you write. "
This is really good!
"I really loved it, especially the sexual tension that’s constantly around them. I would like to see them a little bit more affectionate, brushing their fingers in passing. subtle, maybe a little hesitant. Not sure how to describe it. Do you plan on multiple POV? I did see some typo’s and repeated words, but nothing too bad. Ill see if I can get it send to you. Overall it’s a good story and I want to read more about where their journey will take them 😄"
