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The Lost Pet

"James and Sophia were meant for each other. I'm so happy that he was able to rescue her from her mother, Douglas, and Walter. Douglas definitely got what he deserved. Keep up the great writing "

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"I always love a cutesy book, and that's what this is! I thought the plot was good overall, the thing I have to say the most is when you change perspective back and forth a bunch in one chapter...maybe have a little "~" or something like that Ex: Alex was waiting outside for Elenore when he hears a thud come from the woods. Sounding weirdly like a tree falling. "Owww!" she hears a scream. ~ Elenore has trouble breathing, the pain was immense and hard to think past. She heard a faint scream but wasn't sure if it were herself. Her head was pounding and she was trying to force her arms to do something but they wouldn't budge. ~ Alex quickly ran towards the screaming thinking it sounded awfully familiar. She come to a halting stop when she sees the love of her life lying still. She immediately had adrenaline pumping through her veins and went to help Elenore. ~ Elenore sees a figure but is soon taken into a deep sleep and the last thing that goes through her mind is Alex. A tiny "I love you, Alex" escapes her lips when she passes out. Something like that? Anyways, your book was amazing! The characters were thought up well, I would love to see a bit more of the character development( you know, like the changes that they go throughout the book being more significant), but I know the time that it takes to write a good story, so no worries there. It was a job well done, thank you for putting your book out there!"

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The lost pet

"Once again an amazing story thank you xx"

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Excellent Read

"This book had me from the very beginning. It is a must read for anyone who loves vampire romance."

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Lost pet

"So unique 👏👏 enjoyed it so much. Thank you."

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Love it

"I love it! Only problem is it's a bit hard to tell who is speaking sometimes, other than that it's amazing."

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Stolen pet

" It’d be nice if it was more clear who was speaking and when. "

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Ms. Magar

"Definitely a good story and I am glad that I read it. I would also like to read the next book about Van."

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