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Superb!

"Out of all the books I've read here on Inkitt, this one has the most cohesive prose structure. It's simple but the voice is very well-defined. It's easy to go through and never loses it's flow. The plot (from what I've read in chapter one and small portion of chapter two) is interesting. The blend between the normal life of our protagonist and their extraordinary abilities is really well done. Information is partitioned in an effective way and it never seems that the normality of our protagonist is being sacrificed for exposition (though that is not to say there is no exposition at all). Overall, I would say this is a well-written story and exactly the sort of thing Inkitt needs more of."

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