Inkitt
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Zilferia

"I need more. "

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Zilferia

"I really loved it. I enjoyed everything through the story. Looking forward to the next one "

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Heavily recommended!

"9/10 stars!"

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Loved it!!

"Great plot, great spelling, great development of characters, Great everything!"

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Great Plot

"The book was awesome. Loved the story plot development a lot. "

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Good book

"It was a really good book "

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Zilferia

"Very cool story can't wait for the next one"

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Zilferia

"Very interesting plot and unfolds in a captivating manner. Keeps you glued for hours. Glad I chanced upon Zilferia. "

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can work on writing style

"a story in present tense is really difficult to read. also some parts are very lengthy, like the first chapter story narration. you can't let a character talk that much. i couldn't read more bcz of it. try editing it. "

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