What is your opinion?
Lot of plot twists
"I like how this is written but I’m ngl I am still confused as to what is happening but I am looking forward to finding out the explanation for everything. There is a lot of plot twists for sure. I definitely don’t think I expected to read anything that I read, and it is very much not possible to figure out what is likely to happen next. I am enjoying this so far. I finished it and I’m still thoroughly confused, but I like it. I would love to like, know what exactly was happening though or an explanation or something. Would still recommend. "
Holy crap
"Oh my God this is amazing."
lost interest-was okay
"i enjoyed this book up until chapter 6, with the weird bear cult thing. the story was really good till then, it seems like every chapter is supposed to have a traumatic event but it doesn't fit well. the plot was okay, i had some trouble understanding it, due to the contestant time skips. the writing style throws me off a bit, it feels like i'm reading a discord roleplay with the way the talking and actions are written. there are a few grammar and punctuations either missing or done incorrectly. with some revisions this book would be amazing. chapter 6, was my turnoff, but some may like that. i don't think you should change it but maybe reword it, or change the chapter its in and give it its own chapter. but good job, i've read worse! "
Could be good.
"This story is hard to read. The direct speech parts are written like a screenplay. I don't know, maybe this is on purpse as the book is about a screenplay writer, but for me it was impossible to finish. The plot itself is compelling, but the direct speech and the grammar mistakes make it pretty hard, though. "
Stockholm
"Sorry, but putting the name of the speaker first was hard to get used to. For example: Instead of the sentence saying Rue: I don't know. Try, "I don't know " Rue answered. You may think im being fussy but if I wrote a book I would take on board all criticisms. Just my view and hope it gives you something to look at in your future writing. I enjoyed your book. Keep writing cause you have talent. Good luck for the future. "
