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What is your opinion?
Great!
"Great book so far! "
It’s good!
"I love it, can’t wait until you finish!"
It’s nice!
"I like it a lot, I can’t wait until they get to the lake! I can’t wait for it to keep going, also a few tips on your writing. For the dialogue put quotations and like make a new line every time someone new is speaking. Ex: “Graywing! Graywing!” Thunder shook Graywing until he woke up “I’m up, I’m up,” Graywing groaned Ect. I know that’s not how you wrote it, but you can take what you wrote and do something like that. You don’t have too, just a suggestion. Other than that, I love it! Great job"
