What is your opinion?
Good concept and story
"I really like how the story is written, it is short but good, Being that it is your 1st attempt at a horror thriller I think it's a really interesting start. From what I read so far it's been very interesting and be interesting and I like how the character is portrayed and the feelings that they feel during their dreams. I normally don't read this type of genre vagina so I like how short it is but it is very interesting. Keep improving and you will do great 😀 As for Grammer and Punctuation I suck at that that for me to judge it well get well but I didn't see A lot of issues mostly periods on spaced and no comas but that can be fixed over all Excellent in my opinion for a good start"
More detail
"Starting out good,sounds like it a good book, next go into more details. Like what they look like how old they are. Doing good for your first writing "
