59 chapters read
All I Wanted
"Very well written paranormal romance story with strong plot and characters. Good job. Please keep writing. MR. "
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14 chapters read
Good book
"I hope you continue to write good stories this was by far something that I would reread again I look forward to seeing more from you"
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59 chapters read
All I wanted
"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
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60 chapters read
All you wanted
"Fast phasing story.. should be titled dreaming all over again coz of the everchanging dreams! Unique and amazing situations."
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60 chapters read
All I wanted
"I like how the story went from her dream to reality and I would recommend this story for sure !"
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59 chapters read
Mates
"Loves this book great writing"
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60 chapters read
❤ interesting read 😍.
"To author 🍼 👶: your story was quite interesting with a large amount of main characters, constantly changing twists & drama. Starting off your story as a 'very clear dream' that wound up a premonition type dream was unique. The families involved each being close & large in number with the mate's status constantly changing made for interesting turning points throughout the storyline. Part of me wanted to smack Abby for being too forgiving of Lance..then I wanted to smack some sense into Lance for all he did to hurt Abby. In the end it all worked out for the best for all characters. This was definitely thought outside of the box. Good job on your storyline. Thank you very much for sharing your awesome imagination with us readers 😊!!!"
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58 chapters read
Beautiful
"Beautiful story and amazing writer."
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60 chapters read
I don’t know
"This is an amazing book. It keeps you in suspense. There are a lot of twists and turns. You feel the love between all the characters."
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2 chapters read
Lovely
"While reading the first few chapters I realized how a lot of novels don't have overly loving families in them. It was refreshing. I haven't finished all the chapters but I am happy there are so many. I can't wait to see where the story takes me. I do recommend some editing, in my opinion there are a few things that can be omitted here and there. Overall good work and keep it up!"
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59 chapters read
Confuse plot
"You know why such a low rating. You complicate the plot to much. You don’t need to add another man into a married couple. I jump that absurd chapter. I will look for other novels not written by you. "
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59 chapters read
Hmmmm
"No just no"
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