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KHOSI 2

"ARE THERE REALLY PEOPLE WHO GET OFF ON PAIN SUBMISSIVE YES BUT PAIN? I JUST CAN'T GETMY HAD AROUND THAT"

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Enjoying very much !

"I like the way you develop the characters and make things people consider taboo a piece of everyday people."

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Interesting

"I suppose that there is or will be a 2nd book.. The end was 🤯.. "

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More Than Friends

"lol I enjoyed this more than I thought. Well written "

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Perfect

"I need more"

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Hot!

"This has been a great read! Love the flow of the story and all the hot naughty playtime 🔥"

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More than friends

"You have a great story.... Be great if you could write it so it was longer, draw it out more. But I ain't complaining because you have a gift, Thankyou"

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I am loving you story so far!

"I like the way she writes..."

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Interesting

"The plot was a little all over but the story was very spicy "

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More than friends

"Liked how their roles were defined and yet that didn't consume the entire story. Love that Cinn could embrace her sexual nature without judgement and in a safe space"

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