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Fashionista

"It's enthralling to see how complicated the plot is getting in this story and now there is the fashion model to make even stranger. I can't wait to see how it all pans out. Please keep up the great work, Aimii"

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A World of Discoveries

"I can't wait to see what Laur learns. I want to see if both her human girlfriend and boyfriend will have magic abilities. Also if Sala allows for the 2 humans to share Laur or if she becomes enthralled with them as well. "

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