Alyvia of the woods

"I really like how the the story starts in the beginning. The story has a good flow and I definitely noticed the great vocabulary that you used through out the story.Also the motions of the girl was well written. The vocabulary that you used to describe the surrounding was also great. It was perfectly written. Since there is one only one chapter at the moment, I would simply say that I like the story. Hope you write more chapters soon ; ]"