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What is your opinion?

My review so far

"Good story so far, grammar issues while talking about Mike and Alex very confusing but I figured Alex was an error. Other than that love the book so far. "

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Update

"When are you going to update"

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Slave to no one

"Post faster 😭😭😭😭"

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Skips around a little without any segway from one chapter to the next.

"I am interested but it's a little hard to keep up. I understand when things are in dream state from the way the italicized print leads you in. But sometimes just picking up in the middle at the bringing of the next chapter had me checking to see if I missed a chapter somewhere."

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Not bad

"Its good Writer needs to proof read"

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Good

"It's a nice book so far"

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