Good story so far but needs focus on the story and not picking the largest words that fit especially when they don't fit with the female character who is supposed to be uneducated

"The author has a decent flow, but I wish they would focus more on the story building and the characters than with finding large words to place in random spots. It doesn't help the flow and add in the grammar mistakes its quite distracting. The characters are good so far but I think this would be a very good story if they focused on the world building and the background story more. Overall I keep going to the next chapter but I probably wouldn't read this again just do to the word choices and grammar. "