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Love it so far!
"I love your writing style, it flows very nicely together! I can't wait to read more. I just have one criticism. Feel free to take it or leave it. I think that creating suspense between two potential lovers is a good thing to do and makes the love scenes more exciting for readers. I'm mainly speaking from my personal experience. Just a friendly suggestion, but love your story so far!"
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"Great character development. Enough action to capture audience with an excellent dramatic buildup for continuation."
