Satisfactory

"Really good short story. The prose is simple and effective. The character of Miguel (sorry if I spelled that name wrong) is interesting. One particular highlight for me was how Rick's office was described. It was vivid and gave us a real sense of place. Apart from these strengths, the story also has a few weaknesses. I found a handful of spelling errors. I thought the conversation between Rick and Miguel should have been in direct speech (or atleast a part of it) but I also understand the desire to make the story brief. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. I would recommend it to readers who like slice-of-life stories. "