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Perfection

"It was bit slow in starting and available is bit confused aleays"

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Love

"Love love this story"

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Ava

"The Setting was a perfect the characters and their chemistry between them, and the fact that they are relatable. The story also has some sick plot twists, which I never saw coming. The POV of the story was used in the story, if you read the story you could imagine the thought of ever characters. This book was that it doesn't justify the title as I was expecting something more of a thriller, but it leaned more towards romance. The Story was amazing the chemistry of Cade and Ava was sizzling."

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Loved it

"I seriously loved this story so much. I think it only took me two days... I wanted to yell at all the characters at least once. The build up was amazing too! I also was really surprised at the ending with the cliffhanger. Much luck!"

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Ava

"The author did a wonderful job of building the story. The characters felt unique, and I enjoyed the relationship development throughout. The story felt real, and I became immersed enough in it to want to yell at Ava and Cade when they were being dense with one another! I love them together and how things played out for them. The twists and turns with Mia and the others were unexpected, and I loved it!! Overall, a great story with a cliffhanger ending! I need to know what happened and what will happen next!"

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Fascinating!

"Fascinating story! I am a fan of young adult novels, I like to read about young people going through new and unusual circumstances. This book with its twists and turns is just the type I like. Witty, conversational writing, interesting plot, relatable characters - all necessary elements for an enjoyable read. I love this novel and recommend it highly!"

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OMFG!

"I just can't believe the story! I absolutely loved it, all of it. The characters and their chemistry between them, and the fact that they are relatable. The story also has some sick plot twists, which I never saw coming. I loved the fact that it is an adorable love story but has its mystery touch. My favorite part has to be the ending and I would love a sequel which tells Mia's story: how she got involved in everything and that catches up to the story where you left it. "

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ITS FREAKING AWESOME

"I'm sooooo in love with this beautiful story, Everything was perfect. I loved it so much, kudos to you Charyse, you are an awesome writer :D"

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Oh My Stars!!!

"This was beyond amazing! Its plot was so unique! It was a beautiful romance story with a mystery twist! I can't believe it ended the way it did!!!! There HAS to be a second book!! This needs to be published and made into a series! "

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OMG YES!!!

"I love everything about your story is was amazing. The plot and the way everything was put to together is wonderful, PLEASE!! Tell me there's more to the story is can't end the way it did. I was shocked and in need of the rest"

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OH MY FUCKING GOD

"this is AMAZING I love the plot and the characters. But it cannot CAN NOT end like this their has to be a second book. the plot is very intriguing and unique it is has definitely made it to my top favourite books. xoxo"

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I LOVE IT

"it's really awesome , and I really like the whole idea of the story . I also love how simple the vocabularies because English is my second language and the simplicity of the story is great for me . And I will definitely buy it if it's published. "

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Amazing!

"I haven't had a book keep me on edge like this for such a long time! It was great having that again. Normally I don't enjoy books that switch between points of view, but I loved it with this book. I thought that it worked very well. The storyline was great as was everything else. There were a few(a VERY few) grammar mistakes but it was easy to gloss over them with how well everything was written. I can't wait to read more!! "

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You controlled my mind :)

"To begin with, If you have not read this story yet; well what are you waiting for... Go and read it. The best part of this story is how each character is describing the story in their own words. For example, my favorite parts are chapter 38 and 39 when we start reading what Ava says then it jumps to Cade in the next chapter. This is why this story is so entertaining. You get to have different perspectives of the characters and the story. My favorite statements are: Chapter 8 Betrayal was a bitter sweet in my mouth. Chapter 38 Stopped dead in my tracks. (Making us want more) To be honest if you want a thrill and a sense of wanting more, then this is the story for you."

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I liked the chemistry!

"Throughout the book I loved the chemistry sizzling between Cade and Ava. 💕 Cade is easily one of the best book boyfriends. I enjoyed reading this story. The drawback what I felt in this book was that it doesn't justify the title as I was expecting something more of a thriller, but it leaned more towards romance. "

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