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Great story

" Could use some polishing and editing but very enjoyable. Good pace to the story. Could maybe be fleshed out a bit more but very enjoyable. Hopefully the author can update it with more chapters"

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Very Entertaining!!

"This story is a great example of a book that's plot doesn't move to fast or too slow and the main character is very entertaining. I love how the author moves through her thought process."

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A daughter of smoke and stone

"This book gave me such a thrill and I loved it. I just wish the chaptets were longer😭 But other then that I would definitely recommend this to my friends and read it again because its that good, in my opinion❤"

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Highly recommended!

"I like the idea and I enjoy reading it."

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Amazing!

"I LOVE this book so far. Anyone who enjoys fantasy novels with romantic, some kind of spicy, moments will definitely find it gripping! The book is filled with adventurous, rather persistent spirit of characters. In addition, I love the author’s writing style, great flow! Well done Free Fairy and the best of luck!"

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A Daughter of smoke and Firs

"A wonderful awakening story! I love the cross-culture twist and learning experience involved for both main characters. A little fantasy that is well worth the journey. Please continue the good work❣️🙏❤️"

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^-^

"The plot is amazing. I love the idea of challenges to go to the fae world. The character's personalities are described well and details are well included in the story. The only thing I have to say is when Neirene only knew Castor for 2 days she let him touch her like a lover. I feel like it would be better to lead it on and give your readers something to wait for, but if that's not your writing style then please do like you do. Besides a few grammar and spelling mistakes great job. ^-^"

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Great!

"I found the story to be great and in most cases engaging enough to keep me reading! For the most part, I could follow Neirene's train of thought easily and for anyone who likes books about fairies or is interested in the lore, this would be an easy recommendation! That said, the author could work on their grammar as it sometimes pulls the reader from the experience. But I think you did a great job!"

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Forgot

"Love this book"

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Fairies

"Good story line, like the plot. Author must engage the reader more by using more descriptive words. Find it hard to follow Authors track of mind as the grammar isn't so good. Still like the story"

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